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The buildup is really good. Once you really get into the song it kicks off good. The song is really clean and diverse as far as the way you apply each instrument. I noticed nothing negative about the mastering or overall structure of this track. Well done there!

The only thing that disappointed me was the lack of melody. What you did use was really appealing, I really like the melancholy feel. I just expected a little more melodic diversity for a song that's almost five minutes long. Don't get me wrong, once you write something that hits off really good and you really like the sound, it can be difficult to explore outside that melody... but I would recommend a deeper look into the scale you used. There's a lot of melodic potential for this song. I think it's good now, but it could be better.

Oh, and I scouted you because you deserve to be in the portal. :D

Voofex responds:

Thank you so much :3 <3

LOL. Way better than the last one. This is a nice jam. Keep this up.

iambeast117 responds:

now we getting some where cheers m8

There are good spots and bad spots. Most of it is cluttered and out of synch. I'll say this much. I'll support a Zelda remix anyday. Next time just try not to overcrowd everything lol. Some spots are pretty tough to power through.

iambeast117 responds:

i totally understand what u r saying and maybe i will remake it soon if i feel like it but for now this can be the thing that sits in the back of are wardrobes that speaks to us at night ( oh lord that's dark where did that come from?)

and u got all the way through???!!! u need a trophy

The looping was done really well. This loop feels like it's drifting somewhere. The title is fitting, because it definitely is a transition. Well done!
:D

Satyre responds:

Thanks for your review :)

Best description ever. Also, the song is very chill. I like it.
Should be used in a game called: Endless Journey to Survive.

I appreciate all forms of metal. I like the slow technicality you achieved with this. I would really say, give the drums a lot more attention. If you are going for simplicity, you can still give the opening presence a huge build with the drums. Especially if you are going to open an EP with this, you are gonna want your supporters to feel like they are getting into something with the opening instrumental. Keep it up.

AEOK responds:

Thanks man. Great advice.

1:00-1:30 was a really good transition into the full sound. I would be wary of opening up too slowly in my own opinion. The song is very good, and very clean. Overall, I can't point out anything in particular that you did poorly. I say keep it up!
:D

Lethal-Input responds:

Yeah I hate the intro with a passion lol. I do really like the main parts, but the intro kills it, and ever since I put this out , I've been planning to do a version with a better intro. I'm working on it now actually

Eerily catchy. I have a lot more respect for that word now. Keep it up!

This song made me laugh a lot in a good way. Keep writing please.

SerPounce responds:

Thanks mate, that's the plan!

Really liked :28. A good transition with some feeling. I did feel a little cheated at the end though. There was A LOT of potential for an epic finish. I say keep it up overall.

ADR3-N responds:

I might redo the song later as a non-loop for the convenience of listeners outside NG. Usually I do loops for games, though. Glad you liked.

I do tracks and stuff.
I also stream on twitch at https://www.twitch.tv/xxultimaweapon

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