Overall, this was a very chill beat and I enjoyed it. I'd say, give the piano a bigger presence in the mixer, and add a little variety to the melody. It was simple, but it was still very well done.
Overall, this was a very chill beat and I enjoyed it. I'd say, give the piano a bigger presence in the mixer, and add a little variety to the melody. It was simple, but it was still very well done.
Thanks man, Much appreciated.
ZieGie
Edit : I took the advice given, this track wont be released again until we get our album out but when we get it up here with lyrics id be honored for another review.
ZieGie
This was super good. I wouldn't be surprised if this made featured audio.
Cheers man :)
I really like how you built up the intro one instrument at a time. The sound is very clean and isn't cluttered at all which is always impressive. You made a lot of interesting samples work really well together and I like this a lot. Keep it up! :D
Thank you! I'm glad to hear that since this was my first time using my computer's old music program for a while. O_O
You make FL 11 sound too good.
Nope, milkytracker.
Whoever zeroed you on this sucks. This is a very basic and groovy track. I would recommend adding a mid-level synth with some extra melody to give it the fullest feel it deserves.
will do that!
This was epic. The narration was perfectly done. The memory of this good sir will be immortalized in this performance.
Thank you, I can see that you're a fan of his work, too
Really liked when the lead melody came in. I guess I was expecting it to be a little less repetitive. You have everything down real well. The quality and effects used are good. I say, apply your style to a very well written melody that moves around a lot more and you have a really good song. Keep it up. :D
Yeah, actually when I listen to it now i'm suprised i've uploaded it when it's so repetative.
Maybe i'll remake it some day
I like the atmospheric feel. Sounds pretty clean. Definitely should use this or this style in something bigger.
Glad you liked. I cut it short due to some writing being lost due to a power outage. I plan on revisiting it some time. :)
The buildup is really good. Once you really get into the song it kicks off good. The song is really clean and diverse as far as the way you apply each instrument. I noticed nothing negative about the mastering or overall structure of this track. Well done there!
The only thing that disappointed me was the lack of melody. What you did use was really appealing, I really like the melancholy feel. I just expected a little more melodic diversity for a song that's almost five minutes long. Don't get me wrong, once you write something that hits off really good and you really like the sound, it can be difficult to explore outside that melody... but I would recommend a deeper look into the scale you used. There's a lot of melodic potential for this song. I think it's good now, but it could be better.
Oh, and I scouted you because you deserve to be in the portal. :D
Thank you so much :3 <3
LOL. Way better than the last one. This is a nice jam. Keep this up.
now we getting some where cheers m8
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